English 1010
James Maxfield, Instructor
Exercise #30
Extending Your Organizational Plan
Now that you have formed a working thesis at the end of Ex. 28 and have
created a working Organizational Plan (rough outline) in Ex. 29, it is now time
to start writing.
From you notes, freewritings, and clustering exercises, generate a rough
draft paragraph for each item in your Organizational Plan. Some items will
eventually be developed into multi-paragraph sections, but for now, one rough
paragraph will suffice. Your paragraph may be only 4 or 5 sentences or it may
become a full page. No matter. You will continue to expand and delete
information from each paragraph as you work toward the completion of your paper.
After you have completed a crude rough draft of the entire paper, continue
your editing process by expanding and revising various sentences, passages, or
paragraphs by using some of the methods of variation, amplification, or other
rhetorical figures and strategies that we have learned. By now your paper should
be about 80% roughed-out.
Continue to check and make sure each paragraph relates to your thesis and
that each sentence supports your paragraph in a logical sequence. Finally, make
sure your paragraphs are in a logical sequence to make and support your
argument.
Lastly, don’t forget to write your abstract summary for the paper.