FRESHMAN COMPOSITION, RHETORIC, GRAMMAR II&INTRO. TO LITERARY RESEARCH & WRITINGINSTRUCTOR: James Maxfield
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Ch. 5: Narration Introduction Oral Traditions—Oral Narrative Poetry; Folk tales Story-telling— Memory—Mnemonic Devices—Repetition (forms); vivid description; use of metaphors and analogies; figurative language; instances of rhyme or other uses of word sounds; formulaic patterns in storytelling, e.g. "Once upon a time…" Narration—rhetorical mode which presents a story or a series of events (usually in chronological order, but sometimes with flashbacks) Examples: novels, short story, anecdote, long jokes, tales, fables, narrative poetry (Homer) Narration can be effective as a dominant writing strategy --that is, the way you present your story. It is most effective when: --the events are best told in the sequence in which they occurred; and the events can be witnessed or retold from second-hand information --(Point of View) P.O.V.—usually first person "I"; but can also be 3rd person (he, she, it, they) --Provide enough detail (and description) to hold the reader’s attention—keep in interesting and relevant—"the so what?"—Why they should read it— But stay on track—focused—make all information and details relevant to advancing the narrative or story—Don’t get side-tracked in a sub-plot or a minor detail Checklist—Narrative Writing Model: (5 basic properties of a narrative) More on Narration—Tips for Writing Narration "consists of the act of following a sequence of actions or events in time." […]"a recounting of the facts or particulars of some occurrence" (D’Angelo). If you are still having trouble writing a simple narrative about a personal experience, try this simple model outline. One type of paradigm or model—one strategy for writing a narrative! Title: Should relate to your main point; helps if it is catchy or witty Situation— Introduction: purpose for writing) (time, place, who is acting the events, beginning of the action; main point or issue; purpose of writing)Conflict, Struggle, and Outcome:
Meaning —Conclusion: (the falling action); reflects or circles back to the introductionIt is not necessary to follow this model slavishly, but it will serve as a good starting point if you are having trouble finding your writer’s voice. Other Supporting Features you can use:
Some Ideas for Personal Narratives: An event or incident that was your most or least:
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